Schools should encourage children to eat healthy food while others say that parents should teach them about having a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is true that whether guiding children toward healthy diet is school’s responsibility or healthy appetite should come from family training is a subject of debate. While reasons can be given to justify the former, the latter is much more preferable.
On the one hand, academy systems should educate student about fit and wellbeing diet is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, schools can offer the scientific ways to help student to build healthy diet because they have academic resources and labors for researching this article. Secondly, teaching healthy eating at schools is likely to spread more widely due to the fact that there are a large number of student attending to school in several age groups. Finally, school can increase the efficient of student wellbeing lifestyle as combining healthy diet with physical course. For instance, school cafeteria can provide a suitable appetite for student to recover their energy after they exercise like high protein food, fat-free milk and vegetable.
On the other hand, other would argue that this should be the responsibility for parents to guild their children toward healthy lifestyle. The first prominent justification is that parents can provide not only appropriate healthy diet but also delicious meal since they understand their children taste. Furthermore, it might easier for educating their children about healthy diet at home as children are likely to imitate their parent’s ways of life. For example, children can build durability wellbeing eating habit if this lifestyle is encouraged by their families from early age.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentions above, although some people think academy systems should educate student about healthy diet, it seems evident that families should take a responsibility to guild their children toward wellbeing lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4823943662 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63105933411 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2305687754 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321429787443 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130400153605 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622245597237 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209009313172 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218674457832 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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