Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that there would be convenient for citizens to access the zero-cost transport facilities which invested by the government. there are arguments both for and against this view, but I believe it depends on different reasons.
I completely agree with the idea that government should fully involve in the public transportation investments in order to reduce the cost of transportation services to zero. The first prominent justification is that free accessibility to general transportation services could be an excellent option for reducing gas exhaust emissions because many people would chose to experience public services instead of riding their own vehicles. furthermore, citizens using public transport more frequently would also reduce traffic problems such as traffic jams or accidents owning the fact that the more civilians travel by public transportation the less personal vehicles are used. More importantly, there would be a case that free public services could grant those in financial difficulty such as workers or students opportunities to increase their life qualities. For example, there are several students that come from rural areas studying in big cities with the high cost of living therefore free transportations surely are the big support.
However, I also believe that government should not spend the national budget to sponsor the free public transportation projects. Firstly, funding a huge amount of money would cause a burden of government debt, which weighs on resident’s life though taxes. furthermore, if the transportation facilities do not meet the demand of civilians, it will create a waste of capital sources for the economy. For instance, if citizens do not take the subways to travel, facilities such as stations or trains will not be used for the right purposes and the money funding for this plan will also be considered as waste. Last but not least, the final reason could be the fact that private sectors could increase the qualities of the services as some big companies have not only huge resource but also great responsibility.
In conclusion, while reasons can be given to justify that government should allocate the budget to fund free transportation services for residents, I believe this is not an accurate statement under any circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37845303867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01828544162 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2441424405 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.769230769 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351600168555 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124253363682 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063979040497 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215571563844 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554067218022 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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