Science tell us which activities are good for our health and which are bad for us. despite knowing this, millions of people still do activities which are bad for them.
Why is this the case? what can be done to change it?
In recent years, healthy activities pointed out by science has been gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world. Although this issue has become a bone of contention amongst the critics.
Inspite of being aware of the detrimental impact of bad healthy activities, majority of the populations are inclined towards it rather than the good activities.
There are 2 main reasons for this problem which is habitual effect from the ancestors and secondly, short term escape tendency from realities instead of facing them. Fortunately there are effective solutions to these challenges.
To begin with the first reason, human are genetically weired to their primodial instinct to follow and gravitate towards the forbidden fruits. Although by adapting good healthy habbits people can distance themselves from various distance buy they do not. Consequently, there are numorous study have been conducted in different parts of the world to determine correlation between ancestor habit vs detrimental choice. A recent study conducted by the American psychological society over 100 people over 2 months period of time. Sequentially, it has been found that those group of people gravitate towards the negative habits are linked to their genetics. Another study conducted by Australian medical association define the same notion. For instance, if a doctor ask adiabetic patient not to take sweets and take physical exercise, that patient most likely to be found doing the opposite due to the behaviour of their ancestor. Second reason behind this problem is short term escaping tendencies from realities. Most of the people gets overwhelm by the challenges that life throughs at them, therefore , instead of facing them they tend to go to the opposite direction of reality. Instead of facing them they generally try to escape from the problem. For instance, an obese man have high risk in developing certain physiological disorder like cardiovascular disease, stroke, etc. if they given advice to work out, they escape to danger simply by avoiding the idea of being sick in the future and continue bad habbit. While dealing with the 1st problem, it can be changed by the behaviour change and psychotherapy. For instance, most of the people suffering from the negative gravitating tendencies, are cured by professional psychotherapist by changing their subconscious mind.
Sequentially, 2nd problem can be solved by awareness enhance to people, for example, people need to be shown the bad impact of their choices and thus increase towards good.
To recapitulate each problem has definite solutions. Although it is detrimental to follow bad habits by knowing the consequences, it also can be solved through proper guidance.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...deal of attention throughout the world. Although this issue has become a bone of content...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gravitate towards the forbidden fruits. Although by adapting good healthy habbits people...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 510, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...l society over 100 people over 2 months period of time. Sequentially, it has been found that t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1099, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es that life throughs at them, therefore , instead of facing them they tend to go ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3793911007 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8758892035 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569086651054 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5352390149 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.409090909 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226642076192 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545020704246 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467709850035 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112907502895 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355257252104 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...deal of attention throughout the world. Although this issue has become a bone of content...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gravitate towards the forbidden fruits. Although by adapting good healthy habbits people...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 510, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...l society over 100 people over 2 months period of time. Sequentially, it has been found that t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1099, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es that life throughs at them, therefore , instead of facing them they tend to go ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3793911007 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8758892035 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569086651054 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5352390149 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.409090909 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226642076192 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545020704246 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467709850035 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112907502895 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355257252104 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.