Tourism is encouraged in many countries Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages
In recent years, The expansion and associated merits and demerits of tourism has been gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world . Most importantly this issue has been a bone of contention amongst the critics. While some people consider this as a detrimental for its local fauna and flora , I would contend that it has vast positive impact too.
To begin with tourism attract a lot of business opportunity that might be a golden opportunity for many countries to bolster their economy in the current financial crisis throughout the world. This can be exemplified by the recent movement of the Arabian countries like UAE. By making their country economy fully based on tourism is not only ensuring a secure stable financial future for them but also it has reduces he burden from their primary income source of oil based economy which might be end soon. Consequently, the young business and multiple income stream for its inhabitant will emerge. Therefore, the financial insecurity in the long run has been minimized. A survey conducted last year shows UAE's economy has been boosted by 56% since their expansion for tourism in palm island opened.
Conversely, it is also needed to consider the environmental impact for this kind of movement. Furthermore it is also true that exploiting the worlds natural resources and creating impediment in the natural ecosystem creates a lot of distress. To illustrate in cox bazar which is the largest sandy beach in the world shows degradation of its security and attract fraudulence in the business. For instance, the local businessmen charges high price for even a 1 dollar worth of souvenir. However this problems can be solved by the implementation of the lows and proper regulation by the authority easily.
To recapitulate, tourism brings vast beneficial impact to a country and its people. It also have some demerits but the advantages always outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18902439024 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86783242361 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2359056947 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274295021848 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791495615794 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154241946235 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280627792725 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.367621650604 0.056905535591 646% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.