Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our knowledge through learning discuss both sides and give opinion
In recent years the way of improving knowledge has been gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world. Most importantly it has been a bone of contention of psychologist and society regarding this debate.
While most of the people would consider that intelligence is a subject of inborn genetics, I would consider that intelligence can also be attained throughout the learning procedure of proper brain work and ability to spatial recognition.
On the one hand it is inevitable that genetics plays a vital role of developing cognitive and intellectual behavior of a children of becoming an intellectual person. Therefore, a lot of research has been carried out in different parts of the world that explains a strong correlation
Therefore a lot of research has been conducted in different part of the world that explains a strong correlation of innate genetics to the talent of a person
Therefore a lot of research has been conducted in different part of the world that explains a strong correlation between subject to object.
An empirical survey conducted by the London psychiatric association in 2021. The study concludes its result by discovering a link between intellect and their parental genetics. More intelligent people belongs to intelligent parental genetics. Defined the same notion
To further elaborate on this, another scientific study which were conducted in US ministry of health, they have found that the gene that carries the intelligent DNA to a children, comes from their mother.
Conversely, Intelligence can be attained and improve throughout the proper learning. A good illustration on this that , a scientific study conducted over 500 children in the period of six months, in this period the children were given specific task to develop their brain capacity and learning capabilities which include the improvement of the pattern and spatial recognition abilities. After finishing the study it has found that these children shows superior intelligence that other students at school.
To recapitulate, the debate will continue in different levels.
Personally I believe that genetics plays an important role in terms of intelligence in the children (but not ultimate way to be ), all things considered it is also arguably said that throughout the proper learning intelligence can also be improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39509536785 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06086493932 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487738419619 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.86497986 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12401428371 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474590766362 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498005889622 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468814088602 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434952346837 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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