scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree??
It is widely acknowledged that science plays a paramount role in the development of our life. Because of this, some people argue that the governments should take control and conduct major scientific research instead of private institutions. From my perspective, I completely agree with this view.
It is understandable why people are of the opinion that the conduct of research should be best carried out by the government. The key rationale is that there are two dangers of private conduct of research. Firstly, the results may be flawed due to profit motive. Thalidomide perfectly exemplifies this situation. This type of new drug was researched and developed by a non-government organization. Thousands of patients using it, and the consequence was disastrous. It caused malformed births among people using it. Secondly, from ethical perspective, leaving research such as genetic engineering in the hands of corporations may have profound social effects. GM crops, for example, with unproven effects, have resulted in the imbalance of the whole ecosystem.
Moreover, all research need to be under the control of the government because it not only secures the results and avoid unwanted consequences, but also help them to allocate budget reasonably. Universities can conduct high – quality research. And then this knowledge can be shared to benefit society instead of being used in for commercial purposes. In addition to that, government – decision making is best way to prioritize expenditure on specific areas of research, taking into the needs of society both present and future. For instance, there is a need to develop and research alternative source of energy such as renewable energy.
In conclusion, it is sensible for the government to take control and conduct all the scientific research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05050719195 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5904991434 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252500623866 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730832134846 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734475596716 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166484575692 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188522424441 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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