Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Scientists predict that computers will be more superior compared to human’s intelligence, raising the question of whether it is positive or negative. This essay first closely examines both viewpoints before concluding that I agree with its positivity.
On the one hand, it is understandable why advocates of the superiority of artificial intelligence deem it as advantageous. In light of its power over humans, countless tasks have been performed completely by robots without engendering many errors, thereby bolstering the economy owing to higher working productivity. For instance, jobs associated with assembly, manufacturing, or packaging are now taken over mostly by robots, yielding certain benefits as to economic growth. This serves as a testament to how powerful AI can be in our interconnected world.
Opponents, on the other hand, may argue that workforce incentivizing robots’ roles would come at the expense of higher unemployment rate. It is clear that the more jobs computers take over, the more likely these previously-performed-by-human jobs will be dominated by virtual intelligence, leading to more unemployed workforce. Nevertheless, it is important to note that robots just can perform repetitive jobs and can hardly replicate ones that demand human qualities such as doctor or teacher. Apparently, robots cannot act as a therapist, whose jobs require empathy and understanding among people, as they, by their nature, do not possess any human traits needed for these tasks.
In conclusion, I believe that if managed appropriately and utilized, robots will become powerful tools that can boost the economy, given the improved productivity it offers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...mpared to human’s intelligence, raising the question of whether it is positive or negative. This essay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45980551231 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687747035573 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1708933002 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152633870738 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552739007367 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658671362122 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950655709476 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542212852457 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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