Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education
and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people claim the education and job training are better than prisoning people when dealing with offenders. While it is true that crime committers can be helped through education and vocational training programs, I believe putting them in prison is the best solution.
To begin with, giving criminals opportunities to learn through education and job training programs is a good idea. Firstly, most people who committed crime are due to lack of education. Therefore, if they are well-educated, they might be helpful to society. If they do not have the opportunities for education, they would not realize their fault in the past and are likely to commit another crime. Secondly, learning how to do a job can help them to have more opportunities for employment. As a result, they can work for their living and would not break a law again.
However, I would argue that sending offenders to prison is the most effective way. First, criminals are likely to know that they were wrong when being punished. If they are not penalized, they might not understand their illegal actions. As a result, the rate of crime would be raised. Furthermore, keeping offenders far away from others helps to make sure the safety of a country. For example, New Zealand is listed as the safeties country of the world as it has isolated prisons for all criminals.
In conclusion, while education and job training bring some benefits to criminals, I support the view that sending them to prison is the best way.
- Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by luck. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations. 61
- Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- In some countries the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development 72
- It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people We can just learn much from books films and the Internet Do you agree or disagree 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70336555263 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8261072614 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267720048899 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851345755491 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895621945259 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192727039284 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885134210063 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.