Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by luck. Do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about what makes a successful person. While it is true that luck is important to success, I would argue that there are other crucial factors for someone to achieve their aims.
To begin with, there are many reasons why luck has an important role to play in achieving goals.
Firstly, people are likely to not be able to succeed with bad luck no matter how hard they try. For example, a Manchester United’s talented football player named Luke Shaw has 3 forgettable years as he could not play for the club due to a series of injuries. Secondly, some people can get what they want thanks to good luck. For instance, a US billionaire named West Brown currently has his own big company which is making good profits annually due to being a lottery winner in 2015.
However, I do not that luck is the most important factor contributing to goal fulfillment. First, people can fulfill their aims because they continuously make efforts. For example, Christiano Ronaldo is one of the best football players in the world, and he did it by practicing more than 10 hours a day for nearly 30 years. Furthermore, success means facing many failures, so thinking positively is another important factor. If people give up whenever they fail to do something, they would not be able to achieve what they planned.
In conclusion, luck undoubtedly is important for people to achieve their aims, I would argue that there are more key factors to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82213438735 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60983326495 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0884682648 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8461538462 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165591466943 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659012481103 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662027146417 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107132479015 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397961712221 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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