Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.
it is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, but I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.
There are some reasons why many people think that governments spend their state budgets to prevent minority languages from disappearance could be seen a waste of money. firstly, it would be cost a huge amount of money to maintain expensive education programmes and other costs including facilities, teachers and marketing to make sure more people learn it. these national budgets could be better spent on other public services. Secondly, countries have just one language would be much cheaper and efficient. As a result, governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that preserving these languages that are not widely spoken as a great way to help countries to protect cultural diversity. firstly, a language has a vital connection with cutural identity of the people who speak it rather than just be a means of communication among people. We will lose the rich cutural diversity if a language disappears, and the whole way of life of communities which speak that languages will also disappear with it. By spending government funding on protecting these languages will help governments to preserve customs, traditions and cutural diversity of nations.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the state are more likely to lose the beauty of nation’s culture if they do not pay money to maintain the minority languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81396678868 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3377013821 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324055826379 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114174367631 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649933791312 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183567374482 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700158777392 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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