Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
In my opinion, the government should pay for education and healthcare system and the people does not have to spend their money on these. I will discuss some of my views in the essay below.
First of all, there is no word to describe the importance of education to every country in the World. Education brings an attempt to help boost a countries future development and progress. For example, the increases in Internet of things and Artificial Intelligence have led to much more streamlined and efficient workplaces. Computers and robots can now do the work of what would have previously been carried out by humans, allowing greater efficiency and higher productivity output. Another example that the teaching can also help to improve the quality of people’s lives and therefore help towards a country’s overall development.
On the other hand, healthcare system is also one of the most important factors in the nation’s sustainable development. In fact, the governments' funding in improving medical utilities would ensure the safety of the citizens of that country in the event of a pandemic or natural disaster. For instance, the Covid 19 pandemic puts a huge strain on medical systems in many countries. That made millions of people who was infected and hundred thousand of patients died. Furthermore, it still has a large number of poor people who cannot have money to fund for these services.
As can be seen, I would argue that the healthcare and education system should be received the government’s financial support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a country' or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: a country; countries
...ucation brings an attempt to help boost a countries future development and progress. For ex...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...millions of people who was infected and hundred thousand of patients died. Furthermore,...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...atients died. Furthermore, it still has a large number of poor people who cannot have money to fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1235059761 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86960471081 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4310830521 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280327317631 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865400374489 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114374221511 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196701258863 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113166970213 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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