Smoking can cause serious illnesses and should be made illegal. To what extent do you agree?
At the present time, there are a plenty of factors which cause bad health. Smoking is one of the main reasons of this problem, so many people believe that it should be prohibited. Personally, I accept that smoking cause many negative effects, but it brings some benefits for developing our life.
On the one hand, I agree that smoking causes many sicknesses. Firstly, smoking harms to human’s health, it affects not only smokers but also the others who are nearby. In other word, it is also the main reason to cause lung cancer, which one of dangerous illnesses in our life. Furthermore, smoking is capable of causing addiction and it makes people can not give up. Therefore, their illness can be more serious leads to difficult treatment.
On the other hand, tobaccos is one of the source for economy development. Tobaccos is a kind of tree which survive a long time ago, then it has developed in India. India is a country where produces the most tobaccos, so it is a products which contributes significantly for economy in India. For example, if tobaccos are prohibited in this country, the economy of India will lost huge revenue. Also, it is not only a main product in India but also in many other countries.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that smoking causes some problems for health of people, but this is by no means we should ban smoking. We should consider other aspects to give the reasonable way to resolve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...re produces the most tobaccos, so it is a products which contributes significantly for eco...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...this country, the economy of India will lost huge revenue. Also, it is not only a ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78486055777 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61975746142 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2163458996 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189139124067 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703769673069 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676972084511 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125379546041 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926472026275 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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