Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is widely believe that community would get advantage from a full restriction on all types of popularity of the products. Well, in my point of view
I disagree with this sentence and as we know all activities have it's own prons and cons .
advertisement provides some knowledge services to the public but for the middle and lower level people nowadays they hold the opinion it's a headache. children, youngsters demands the things which they saw on the television, internet or from market and also from their pals. Organization focusses at marketing very effectively rather than making their product of good quality . By using famous celebraties like film star, cricketers, singer etc. For example by seeing the ad of branded shoes on television children demand those things to their parents which make them guilty and shame as they can't provide them due to crisis of money.
Although, it has many disadvantage but it has its good side also like it helps to give favourable knowledge about the materials and also can acknowledge its prices through different means. In addition by its efficient and smooth advertisement human feel so curious to buy it for them.
In conclusion however, I favour to the sentence but advertisement have it's own benefits and drawback sometime public love it or some time it became one of the great problem through which youngster are getting spoil and pressurizing their parents for those things or product
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the products. Well, in my point of view I disagree with this sentence and as we ...
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...de also like it helps to give favourable knowledge about the materials and also c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02928870293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7331519014 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6904753905 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656062227909 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028194522131 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408831448084 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464836646535 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387510538447 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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