In this contemporary era, technology is revolutionizing every aspect of human life, electronic gadgets are one such development. Some people say that movies can be watched in smart gadgets and therefore no need to go theater to watch, others oppose this view. We will discuss both the views in this essay and hence derive a logical conclusion.
Nowadays, smartphones are equipped with sophisticated technologies to view multimedia contents. For example, we can store a movie in tablets memory and can watch it during a convenient time. Additionally, the internet is supporting the smartphones which give the user the flexibility to enjoy the movie on the click of a button even though it is physically not stored in the device. For instance, YouTube is a predefined application available in the latest gadgets which can be used to watch movies whenever we need without storing it.
Needless to say, big screen and acoustics of the theater give a totally different experience while watching in the cinema. Unlike smartphones, people can watch different format of films. For example, movies with 3D and 4D technology can be best experienced only in cinemas. Also, it is affordable to watch technology enriched films in theaters because everyone may not be able to afford to buy gadgets that support cinema technology.
To sum up, the demand for watching movies in gadgets is increasing exponentially day by day due to the flexibility and hassle-free process available in watching. However, this is not a threat to the cinema because it gives a different experience to the viewers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12451361868 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99009958768 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1250294322 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249096909361 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857193177674 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714703871185 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141650647633 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669763467877 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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