Some believe that modern technology is increasing gap between rich and poor people, while other disagree. Discuss the both given your own opinion?
Some trust that higher technology has Upsurging different between wealthy and poverty adolescent. In addition, on the one hand some people not agree that so i will talk about both view in upcoming paragraph and also giving my thoughts.
First and foremost, it is no doubt that technology is very swift and more even people using in these days .In fact all kind of generations use it anywhere as well anytime. Moreover, people has very active social sites like Facebook, twitter, Snapchat a WhatsApp as far as Instagram and so many others things. Otherwise, technology has so many benefit such as study, increasing better communication skills for others and so learning new things regarding anything.
Nonetheness, the is denying the fact that technology is not rasing gap between high and low individual status. Nowadays, people has well manner nor co - education so they could not think that who never talk poor people. Furthermore, education play a vital play of human being life either all types of student want to achieve high level of education does not matter who status good or bad in the community.Last but not the least. In my point of view technology has giving a lot of information including any sources and even people can
using easily in their way.
All said and done, I reckon technology is best way to talk anyone without see the status rich niether poor standard.Thus, people can easy make new friends on social media
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, i reckon, in addition, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95884773663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66160995687 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2274727523 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19240095477 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746150184963 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348746074042 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089987335779 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048302683201 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.