Some believe that modern technology is increasing gap between rich and poor people while other disagree Discuss the both given your own opinion

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Some trust that higher technology has U...
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Some trust that higher technology has Upsurging different betwe...
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...In addition, on the one hand some people not agree that so i will talk about bot...
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...one hand some people not agree that so i will talk about both view in upcoming ...
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...me people not agree that so i will talk about both view in upcoming paragraph an...
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...ew in upcoming paragraph and also giving my thoughts. First and foremost, it ...
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...and more even people using in these days .In fact all kind of generations use it a...
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...d more even people using in these days .In fact all kind of generations use it any...
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...rs things. Otherwise, technology has so many benefit such as study, increasing better commu...
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...o many benefit such as study, increasing better communication skills for others a...
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...egarding anything. Nonetheness, the is denying the fact that technology is not rasing ...
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...le has well manner nor co - education so they could not think that who never tal...
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...manner nor co - education so they could not think that who never talk poor peopl...
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...of student want to achieve high level of education does not matter who status goo...
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...who status good or bad in the community.Last but not the least. In my point of view ...
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...t of view technology has giving a lot of information including any sources and ev...
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...ncluding any sources and even people can using easily in their way. All said ...
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... All said and done, I reckon technology is best way to talk anyone without see the stat...
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...ay to talk anyone without see the status rich niether poor standard.Thus, people ...
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... the status rich niether poor standard.Thus, people can easy make new friends on so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, i reckon, in addition, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95884773663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66160995687 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2274727523 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19240095477 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746150184963 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348746074042 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089987335779 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048302683201 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.