Some educational systems make students study specialised subjects from the age of fifteen while others require students to study a wide range.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
some educational systems students take study especially they have interest according their mind can do it in teenagers age, Whereas some people consider that require students to study a wide range. I will discuss both view
in upcoming paragraph and give my opinion.
First of all, education play a vital role part of life and third eye of human being lifetime . after that, parents have always do pressure for their children in the study and even who extremely want my kids perform well in school . Furthermore, parents could not allow freedom for juvenile because they think that pupil beat everyone so they have giving bunder for new generation Otherwise, youth have no right to choose their study line after 10 class pass out.
Nevertheless, parents can't realise that what their youngster want to do in own life nor career field. Moreover, parents don't give option to child which types of course who want for him/her self. parents should extremely involve in any activities. However, it is bad impact of students life because they have no freedom to choose this future plan, For instance, they feels like anxiety, depression, overcare, mental illness and so on. Last but not the least, they can 't share their feeling and emotions for parents either they want it.
All said and done, I reckon parents have duty to guide his kids but don't force her decision . Thus, students have no interest to do course by choosing by parent so they could feel good and they can face mental or physical week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, third, thus, well, whereas, for instance, i reckon, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31593297924 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0802665764 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154508999609 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605727963504 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901058371603 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118071424385 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124645359044 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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