Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that citizens will buy a product based on their whole needs and the advertisement is unnecessary. I partially agree with this statement for some reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, it is undeniable that advertsads may help consumers to differentiate some products depending on not only the quality but also the price. This is because marketing campaigns provide some detailed and insightful information, and then, consumers independently and freely decide before purchasing a product. By utilizing advertising, they may definitely choose the most suitable and preferable goods. Moreover, commercials can make buyers know when a product has an interesting price. In this case, potential purchasers are truly attracted and may spend less money on stuff without considering whether the need is strongly necessary or not.
Turning to the reasons that make me agree is people generally have a product-related list which they have to pay. Because of this, they usually estimate how much expenditure in total before they go to the market, meaning that they would clearly manage and limit their needs. Finally, it is unavoidable that the main reason for people to buy some products is to survive and meet the demands of life. This is since belongings would truly support their daily activity, ranging from household needs to working tools, so that ads are undesirable in determining their actual necessity.
In conclusion, it seems to me that ads bring essential effects, ranging from helping to choose a product to informing about a discount. This is as long as they can wisely and vigorously handle their expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29056603774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87274669077 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7037988854 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264608144329 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925876876735 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984328051121 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170711074377 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112114402903 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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