Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modernized world, there is a perspective that reducing technology will make our life simpler. In my view, technology has made our life more complex sometimes, but it has played a vital role in most aspects of life.
On the one hand, the negative side of technology has changed many things in a bad way. The development of communication applications such as Messenger, Instagram, etc. is abused by young people so they are prone to avoid interacting directly. For example, a group of people have a meeting in the café, they just use their phone to surf the web, this partly makes the quality of the hangout decrease. Furthermore, technology is capable of prompting us to depend on it almost totally. A lot of very simple things are done with the smartphone whereas it will be better if we do it by hand, recording the knowledge by taking a photo in the university is an instance.
Nevertheless, technology has really been an integral part all over the world and in our life. Communicating from a far distance is a feature appreciated and used by most people. For instance, we still talk to and see our loved ones through a smartphone with communication applications. Additionally, technology helps us to reach a vast amount of knowledge on the world easily with the internet. This convenience is the ingredient, which cannot be lacked, in improving all aspects of the world. Eventually, technology is still a lifesaver for humans if we know when and how to use it properly.
To conclude, I believe that we should learn how to use and turn technology to our strengths rather than eliminate it from our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'complex'.
Suggestion: sometimes complex
...view, technology has made our life more complex sometimes, but it has played a vital role in most...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e of technology has changed many things in a bad way. The development of communication appli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97338534471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6120409773 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219145621915 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727831643916 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762402683895 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158757377644 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08306999943 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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