Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that modern technology has made resident life too complicated and the most appropriate method is to lead a simpler life without technology. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly disagree with this notion because of its drawbacks and unpratical for the society. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
To start with, in the industrialized world and with the appearance of new innovation that the requirement of induviduals have increase gradually, so modern technology is greatly significant for the people life. Not only does this phenomenon provide numerous academic knowledge, social experience and valuable information for the adolesence which improve their mentality life and cognitive systerm, but also the propotion of umemployment and homeless people in their country can be reduced since more occupation have been created such as youtober or tiktoker. Furthermore, the socioeconomic will be narrowed where all teenagers have the same apportunity to appoarch with the interesting knowledge. To illustrate, there was a survey, by Kevin Clam, the famous interviewer and professor, which is an expert about the success of postgraduate who understand the strength of available internet. The statistics demonstrated that nearly everyone has got plenty of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the resident life. If children depend too much on the high technology such as automatic robots or electric car, their creative, imaginative and imdepedent abilities can be decreased dramatically. Morover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally agree with the possitive affection of modern technology, but it still have some negative aspects for the society. The government need to have clear plans to advance their citizens for the nation's development.
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...lenty of achievement in their career. However, we can not negate the drawback ...
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...plans to advance their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50160771704 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01851347175 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636655948553 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9403449694 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128792183946 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473424467015 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797754350385 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887518147082 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758270156632 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.