Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, society has witnessed a significant breakthrough in technological advances which have changed the living considerably. However, it is thought that technology leads to a complicated life and should be removed to solve this problem. From my perspective, I partly disagree with that statement because of several reasons.
At the first glance perspective for the matter, many a person those who thinks that technology is very complicated and should be eliminated to make a simpler life may have several arguments. At first, older may face difficulties when using electronic devices including computers, tablets, or smartphones. For instance, to make a video call on a smartphone that is connected to the Internet, people need to create an account on specific social media platforms. The elder people could not do all steps without assistances, therefore, they might feel hard to adapt to new life-upgrades. Another argument is that in the modern life, children are deeply dependent on media-devices for entertainment and ignore outdoor activities. As a consequence, that leads to adverse effects on physical and mental health because of their passivity.
Nevertheless, I firmly hold a belief that technology plays a crucial role in our life and cannot be replaced in the future for several reasons. First and foremost, thanks to rapid developments in technology, there have been improvements in teaching and learning nowadays. By way of illustration, during the time of the COVID-19 pandemic, students are not interrupted in their learning’s progress since schools deploy online learning methods on platforms via social medias such as Zoom, Microsoft Team, or Skype. Also, it is easy for students to find materials for their studies by using electronic devices connected to the Internet. The second reason is that technology helps strengthen family and friends relationships even though they live far away from each other. In fact, digital telecommunication makes it simpler, quicker, and more productive for users to communicate with people across boundaries. Social network websites, for instance, allow human beings to keep in contact with the distant relatives with only an internet-connected smartphone. The following reason can be seen that people nowadays also use technology to gain recreations and relax after their stressful working hours. This is because they can easily enjoy movies, kinds of music, or entertaining programmes directly on their internet-connected devices. This somehow pushes into the reduction of many mental illnesses in society.
To sum up, although technology has its drawbacks, it is undeniable that it has generated numerous significant positive impacts that improve our lives, and in my opinion, turning away from technology is impractical with unforeseen consequences towards living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2412.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57043879908 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17810770034 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61662817552 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4571915798 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162182290507 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461649414884 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475641717678 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113680321694 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032671574659 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.