Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
By growing the technology and present of smart phones people use it a lot daily. In fact, using them has become part of daily lives. Particularly new generation spent most of their times with smart phones. In my opinion, there are several different reasons which children have tendency to use them, therefore if children would be improving their knowledge and skills it is positive otherwise is negative.
Using smart phones has become an integral part of people of every society without considering their ages. Hence, developing technology, and internet would be having a lot of effects on people lives. Children like to play online games which these phones presented it. These games make children addict by it and spent most of their daily times with playing. In long term causes pain in eyesight, has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play online every day gets a nervous tic. So, parents have a crucial role to manage this problem by controlling their time.
Another point is impact on their behavior and personality character. In many cases children who allocate most of their times to play games are introvert persons. This would be affected on their future. An introvert person cannot have any communication with others and it cause depression and many other diseases. not only, waste of time but also, they waste this opportunity to learn beneficial subjects.
Finally, parents can teach their children to convert this big threat to a good opportunity to learn useful subjects such as programming and make money from it. not only they can improve their skills in a practical subject but also, they can gain much money in their teenagerhood.
In conclusion, undoubtably children spent most of their times by smart phones but it depends on how use smart phones whether improve individual skills or waste of the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Suggestion: Not
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54008407437 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9821982548 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3157894737 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191602667147 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613616809307 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422253925494 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106026464952 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413536104184 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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