Some claim that studying abroad has greater benefits for a student's home
country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A growing number of students are choosing to study abroad as a result of the many advantages it offers over a traditional education in the United States. According to one person who hasn't been persuaded by it: Throughout the following paragraphs, I'll explain why my views align with this worldview.
First and foremost, students who go to another country to further their education have the opportunity to become familiar with other countries' educational systems and gain practical experience. For example, students at New York University can learn their majors from notable professors and gain hands-on experience at companies that support their curriculum. As a result, students can get knowledge of the working conditions in the developed country in which they are staying and prepare themselves for future employment opportunities. Aside than that, this will provide them a new perspective on their major that they wouldn't have had at home. As a second benefit, students will be able to travel around the world. They will gain a new perspective on the world by studying in a new country, such as the United States, the United Kingdom, or France. When they return to their home country, or even their host nation if they enjoy living there, study abroad students are more likely to land better jobs. There are many options for Vietnamese students who graduate from international institutions to work for large corporations such as Vingroup or other multinational firms, earning a greater pay than students who graduated from domestic universities in Vietnam. Many students choose to stay in other countries after graduation and pursue careers in those countries' businesses.
Studying abroad has a number of drawbacks, not the least of which is the potential for financial hardship. Many students have left the host country because they were unable to work and study at the same time. In addition, students struggle with challenges such as homesickness, cultural shock, and finding new acquaintances. Nevertheless, they will succeed if they are well-prepared for the challenges they will face and have a plan in place to deal with them.
Last but not least, young people now have the opportunity to visit and learn about a whole new world. In order to offer their children the best opportunity for a successful life, many parents are willing to work hard and give up their personal desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15938303342 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8329398754 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555269922879 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3765457098 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191639019847 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683843157767 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431677231572 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102410094716 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636674570949 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.