some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all time?what are the advantages for a company of a having a uniform? are there any benefits of having for the staff?.
with the rise in modernizatio, the man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungle to take first step on the moon. nevertheless, there are some issues remains and irrevocable asal complex as ever. The given topic asserts that what are the advantage of staff uniforms? throgh this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion bye the end.
There are many advantage to wear the staff uniform. On one think which is spring on my mind that is, companies gain the lot of profit; with the help of advertisement ,and they are also got the public popularity. Employee travel to any place, at that time wear the staff uniform ,and number of people see that increase the demand for companies. In addition to this, it is also describe the decorum of the companies. when all emplyers wear the staff uniform number of people had been seen that company follow the government restriction.Moreover, one of the benefit of wearing the uniform is that it vanish the discrimination amoung the employers ,and there are fullfil the gap between poor and rich prson.
On the other hand, there are also number of benefits to wearing the staff uniform for employers.Firstly, all emplyers are wear the uniform while they are feel the comfortable. Bacause number of person belong to the poverty line, that's why it is beneficial to the poor employer.Furthermore, they are show the identification of his company. they can easily entered the company with the help of staff uniform whereas it is also beneficial to save money. because employer go daily in the companies ,and they brought some new clothsin daily life with the help of staff uniform there are fullfil the basic needs.
conclusion, as we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. however,i trend to believe that it is also mendatory to employees to wear the staff uniform whereas companies earn more profit with the help of advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91317365269 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93566042299 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505988023952 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1859895078 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321509305451 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100867212111 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880016585597 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17972478503 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636046491518 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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