In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this age of change, surging number people being throne to health problems due to junk food is a matter of the utmost gravity. It is sometimes argued that authority should promulgate a legislation adding tax on this kind of food. In my opinion, I completely consent to this statement by showing some reasons.
The first reason to this point is to be capable of minimizing the frequency of customers eating fast-food. This could be explained by the fact that when imposing tax food, the price has a tendency to witness a significant increase. By showing a principal example, fried-chicken of Lotteria,Jolibee company are consumed particularly to the school-aged children due mainly to its cheap price. Nevertheless, after the rule is enforced, each product could cost pretty expensive. As a result, the number of customers is likely to fall down and it just maintains some loyal costumers.
Secondly, imposing tax is a optimal method to heighten residents' consciouness about the health hazard on this type of food. This is because with the aid of cutting-edge technology, people could broaden their horizon about the root reasons of action of government and the jeopardies of those illness they catch in circumstsnces of eating the considerable amount such as obsesity, heart diseases,...
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I contend that putting tax on fast-food presents a plethora of definite advantages. It is advisable for citizens to apply the rule effectively which is a way to protect their life more safely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Jolibee
...cipal example, fried-chicken of Lotteria,Jolibee company are consumed particularly to th...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l costumers. Secondly, imposing tax is a optimal method to heighten residents co...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'those illnesses'?
Suggestion: this illness; those illnesses
...ion of government and the jeopardies of those illness they catch in circumstsnces of eating t...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... amount such as obsesity, heart diseases,... In conclusion, for the reasons I hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15983606557 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07324312416 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2136025843 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325514864636 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10908914357 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690597916771 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181740529001 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605162392714 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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