In some countries the avarage weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some countries, people's average weight is rising while their level of fitness and health is declining. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have risen and what we needed to do to solve them.
Firstly, many people nowadays prefer fast food to healthy food because it is quick and looks delicious. Most fast food contains a high level of sugar and fat and as a result those who frequently eat fast food become overweight. Secondly, because of the development of industry and capitalist society. They must wake up early and go to work until late at night therefore people have no time in doing exercises. As a result, many people have some serious health problems such as obesity and diabetes
There are serveral things that people should try to resolve the problems. One of them is that people should go on diet. People should avoid in consuming fast food because they contain a lot of high cholesterol ingredients which are dangerous for their health. They should try to consume more healthier production such as wheat, oat, vegetable, or fruit rather than consuming fried chicken or pizza. People should also try to do more physical activities and burn more calories than they consume each day. They could do simple exercises such as running, jumping rope, and cycling. For example, if you jumping rope continuously for 15 minutes, you will burn 300 calories, which is equivalent to running for 30 minutes.
In conlusion, I agree with the statement that so many people are having problem with their body weight and health conditions nowadays because of the unhealthy lifestyles which was the biggest problem of young people. And there are some solutions for this problem. They should be getting diet and should have more exerciese.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...h is declining. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these problems have risen a...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...heir health. They should try to consume more healthier production such as wheat, oat, vegetabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94612794613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44953139617 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4287761024 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234834853333 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793894526498 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718368823971 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17107499561 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112001804077 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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