Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, many people are choosing to live far away from their families and friends in another cities or countries where give them many career prospects. While this may have certain drawbacks, from my perspective, the benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, people who move away from their families and friends are more at risk of having mental health problems. Physical distance usually discourages them from confiding about their troubles to their relative. This is often the case of migrant workers who keep their feeling to themselves just to ease their families worries can easily to have a mental health issue, such as depression while their friends and families at home remain unaware. And especially, these problems can get worse with the introverts who tends to be make a distance with their new colleagues and has difficulty making new friends.
On the other hand, for those relocating for a job, they are more likely to achieve career fulfilment. Firstly, they are often having more career prospects from outside their hometown to people of working ages. Bigger countries or cities will provide them more choices for their dream jobs with significant higher wages. Secondly, this can help people, especially people who just reached the adulthood advance their career faster. Living with the families can have many problems and conflicts by the different of generation and it could trigger a emotional issues which could negatively impact to their work performance. Without these family conflicts, young generation can devote themselves to their jobs and future.
In conclusion, because of work, more and more people choosing to find a valuable jobs outside their hometown, which have both advantages and disadvantages. But in my point of view I think this is more beneficial to individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22602739726 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6003684223 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6186219718 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357240537007 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131754644933 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797611524323 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222998991417 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197549404748 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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