in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is certainly true that the increasing rate of overweight children and adults is facing health problem. obesity is a major problem which is increasing day by day. There are several causes of this alarming trend but measure could certainly be taken to tackle this problem which will be discussed with assisting example in this essay.
this is one of the worst social evil for which many reasons are to be blamed. The first and foremost reason is hectic schedule of parents. To support it, today almost both parents are working a job for improve financially, due to this reason they have no time to create a meal and their children can compulsory to eat past food as well as fast food. For example, developed countries students generally face these problem, which can improve their obesity and health problem. Secondly, people are doing less exercise as compared to past. Older people were generally prefer to travel by walk and bicycle, and which could do hard work in their lives. However, today's people are mostly depend on technology, which can help to reduce their working than past.
However, this problem can be resolved by certain precautionary measures. The first and foremost solution is that people want to doing different types of excessive as walking, jogging, and gym excessice, which can help to maintain their body and healthy lifestyle. For example, World health organisation published their guidelines and which mentioned that every person should walk/ run minimum one hours a day. Apart from this, parents should provide fresh meal and less prefer to outside junk food for their family. Recently, times of India concluded a survey of how many people are facing different illnesses, which can only possible to more prefer outside food.
In recapitulation, following the analysis of causes and solution of people's life, it can be started from more depend on outside meals, and less excessice in routing life. this problem can be solved by doing regular execessice and create home made food for their family.
- Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway to reduce traffic congesstion Others think that building more and wider road is the better way to reduce traffic congestion Disscuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them Education and job training are better ways to help them Do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extend do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 73
- in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
...en and adults is facing health problem. obesity is a major problem which is increasing ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... with assisting example in this essay. this is one of the worst social evil for whi...
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Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...loped countries students generally face these problem, which can improve their obesity and he...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one hour', 'an hour', or simply 'hours'?
Suggestion: one hour; an hour; hours
...t every person should walk/ run minimum one hours a day. Apart from this, parents should ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ls, and less excessice in routing life. this problem can be solved by doing regular ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45912589553 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7158366025 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197266493798 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718199021531 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465257807948 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136437362191 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319376928953 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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