In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

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...ssue might be caused by two main reasons . Firstly they are eating too much fast f...
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...y popular. fast food has a lot of sugars , fat and many substances that are not go...
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...ubstances that are not good for the body , though knowing the danger of fast food,...
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...ll consuming it uncontrollably every day . In the long run, it can cause overweigh...
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...t can cause overweight and many diseases .Secondly, inadequate exercise is also a ...
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...uate exercise is also a cause of obesity .Nowadays, people are living more and mor...
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... and they do not care about their health . they are too focused on work and forget...
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... tiring day most people just want to eat , play games or watch movies . it leads ...
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...eads to lazy exercise and obesity . Thus , the average weight of people is increas...
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...ealth and fitness are falling. some possible solutions to this problem are ...
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...a healthy diet and doing more exercise. creating a nutritious menu is crucial , it not o...
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...e. creating a nutritious menu is crucial , it not only keeps the body healthy but ...
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...s are balanced so obesity will not occur . Besides, doing exercise is another good...
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... doing exercise is another good solution . exercise helps to burn excess energies ...
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...elps to burn excess energies in the body , helping us to have a stronger body . fo...
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...ody , helping us to have a stronger body . for example : thirty minutes of cycling...
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...minutes of cycling can burn 550 calories , twenty minutes of running can burn 450 ...
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...els of health and fitness are decreasing . However we can solve this problem by cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96107784431 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43558554948 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5210523574 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283556453788 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849527478741 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935840206867 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172797243242 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840143890453 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.