In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, it is clear that a number of people experience increasing of excess weight and unhealthy in several notions. There are several causes and considering solutions for this phenomenon, which I will elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, uncontrolled excess weight caused by the availability of 24-hours street food anywhere can engage consumers in purchasing instant-processed food. Together with that, pop-up online ads deliberately promote foods (variant snacks) and appearance of food stand (aesthetic spots) to pursue being mouth-watering. Sadly, if excess body fat is not properly handled it will afflict various diseases including diabetes and cardiovascular diseases. Furthermore, people having hectic schedules during productive age tend to undergo sleeplessness which induces obesity with aggravating symptoms of mental health as well as anaemia. Generally, ones have heavy work pressure to be more exhausted in completing deadline, which they could suffer from insurable disease.
Turning to solutions, government and other prominent enact regulations to food enterprenuers to provide food quality labels through strict supervisors. This aims the owners to ensure intake their products which contain nutrient-dense food (fibres and vitamins), in order that prone illness people could be invulnerable to diseases such as indigestion and diarrhoea. In addition, each individual should have public awareness associated to principles good habits. One of mainstay of good phycological health that is workout helps to overcome their mental, thereby, improving life expectancy. For example, after occurred pandemic of coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), many influencers (Brenee Brown) appear to influence public to maintain mental positivity.
In conclusion, the causes of both massive of fat and unhealthy increased are mushroomed street food as well as lack of sleep. Meanwhile, those are considering imposing of the authorities and applying for public awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98591549296 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09068292907 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697183098592 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1412698021 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105183768159 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343365398854 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315552678383 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064430060061 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147620303262 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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