In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
People’s awareness of keeping them healthy has not been valued gradually in recent years. There are many problems about the level of their health and fitness, and the higher average weight in many countries is one of these issue. In my opinion, this problem can be attributed to the following two reasons.
First and foremost, they do not have enough time to exercise. People at any ages, not only young people but also adults, all concentrate on their study or work. Too much social pressure such as job promotion and work overtime deprives them of leisure time to keep fit. Another factor is some junk food teem to people’s diet which might already be irregular. Some people especially children and adolescences are addicted to eating junk food including high calorie and little nutrition, causing some digestion and obesity diseases. Besides, irregular eating habit would aggravate these diseases caused by junk food.
Fortunately, some possible solutions can be used to reverse this trend. The government needs to put more financial supports on the public infrastructure. Building some entertainment and fitness facilities in the communities is an effective way to liberate them from hard work and help them balance work and life. Also, if governments encourage commuters walking or riding bikes instead of driving, they could have enough time to exercise and have few influences on their work time. For another, the government should impart knowledge about unhealthy food like junk food and irregular daily diet. Let people realize the goodness of traditional food. Governments also should build people’s awareness of regular physical checkup, reminding them notice their body health.
In conclusion, it is vital to understand that various healthy and weight problems are caused by people’s unhealthy lifestyle. Governments and citizens both should develop the awareness of health through some measures be implemented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47350993377 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80249259382 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4983896565 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265485355156 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076456710868 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519059425453 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173410575067 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392794909882 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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