Some countries have recently passed laws to restrict the daily working hours of employees. Explain whether this will have a positive or negative impact.
In recent times, the regulation of work time limits has been implemented by some nations. While this issue brings demerits under some circumstances, I would state that this has more certain merits which I will elaborate further.
First and foremost, many countries deal with the disadvantages of firm work shift policy which restrict employees’ loyalty. This makes the hires not have another paid job besides the increasing cost of living gradually. A great number of labourers in Indonesia work in the same position without salary increases for ages, hindering better financial income and career growth. Moreover, this could add extra expenditure on running of employee recruitment and dealing with their wages. Reported by American business study, the extra number of new hires brings an excessive increase of labour cost which corporates tend to squeeze off.
In contrast with the aforementioned points, the benefits of this is that their working and private life could be in control to reach better quality of life and healthcare. As seen in New Zealand, a top-notch country with work-life balance, has provided their workers with such facilities including career protection and opportunities. To state further, in forms of business perspective, it could be seen that the policy brings massive growth by the increase of employees’ creativity and productivity. The limit on office hours causes a comfortable work ambience, Google, for instance, has offered flexitime for their workers.
To conclude, the issue that state factors of numerous nations implementing the working hours policy carries great merits. Those include bringing better work-life quality and lower rate of turnover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51724137931 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80874011022 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9035926282 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196278817583 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670567524869 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367822168718 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114219752129 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370278434235 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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