In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over the last few years, more and more people have eaten fast food instead of their meals. This is the cause of the decline in their health of them. High cholesterol and heart problem are all on the rise due to fatty and sugar-rich food. However, the question is whether the higher tax would improve this situation or not.
On the one hand, the higher tax might seem sensible. This leads to an increase in the prices of fast food. People have to spend more money to get their food, so they may consider buying it. Furthermore, the higher tax could help fund the other facilities. The government could use the fund for the improvement of the healthcare system.
On the other hand, we need to look for the negative influence of high taxes on the fast food industry. If the organization wants to keep the prices of its products, it must reduce the prices to buy its supplies. That will impact the farmers, who provide products for the fast food industry, such as corn, egg, and beef. Additionally, the group of people, who eat more of this food, is lower-income people. One possible reason for this is that fast food is far cheaper than healthy produce. For them, fast food is not a choice but a necessity.
In conclusion, I agree that imposing a higher tax on fast food might help to solve the problem, but I think that the government needs more action to help the people who are involved with the fast food industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52918287938 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37549833169 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.496093541 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332622717869 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1132612238 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694812406854 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218974473282 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396813486929 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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