Many people around the world these days are facing serious issues on health on account of consuming junk food excessively. This essay totally agrees that imposing higher tax on the food will be the best solution for this issue. The essay will first look at how the companies are highly likely to press production of the food and then discuss how the number of consumers are possibly decreasing by reducing the food production.
Levying higher taxes by authorities would possibly make the companies producing this kind of food reduce the amount of production. As a result, the products would not be affordable in markets. For example, few years ago in my hometown, there was a fast food shop near from my house, which is X. The local government impossed higher tax to this kind of food and it was becoming less and less. Consequently, local people found difficulties to buy it, and the owner closed their restaurant and moved to another city.
The majority of people consuming junk food have good reasons why they eat it such as price reason that is much cheaper than any other food and the availability of the products. It is justifiable for them. Pressing production of the food would probably affect the number of consumers. An example to illustrate this point is junk food shop in my hometown. They provided some kinds of fast food such as hot dog and hamburgers. After the local authority legislated a law to make tax on this food higher, the store make buyers to pay for this. This thing made consumers hardly went to the store and the profit of selling this product went down.
To sum up, our leader should levy high tax on this food so that it will reduce the amount of health problems that come to us recently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, so, then, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45326821419 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2469695857 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346362797426 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114114768729 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559933979404 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206988494466 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462582898425 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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