In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that governments ought to levy a tariff on junk food because of the increase in the number of health risks involved in consuming this kind of food. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly agree with this viewpoint.
Imposing high taxes might play a vital role as the fund could be used in the improvement of overall medical facilities. This money has been used to treat health problems related to these products. The government could use the revenue to provide financial assistance to low-income families who need help paying for healthcare. This would help to ensure that everyone has access to quality care, regardless of their ability to pay. Tax from tobacco could be used in the same way. The United Kingdom is a prime instance, where money from smokers is used to treat lung cancer and heart disease.
Increasing taxes would make prices more and consumption lower. This seems to stem from the fact that fast food companies would transfer these taxes to consumers by higher product price, resulting in many not being able to afford kinds of food because these are gradually expensive. Fast food would become a luxury merchandise, and then it is only consumed occasionally, leading to less harmful to the general public’s health. For example, the cost of organic food is prohibitively expensive for most people, and that is why only a small percentage of the population buys it regularly. Should fast food prices be increased as highly as organic food, individuals will choose organic food instead.
In conclusion, the tax imposition of authorities can discourage citizens from using junk food and that may boost healthy food access to more people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to pay' or 'pay'.
Suggestion: to pay; pay
...ce to low-income families who need help paying for healthcare. This would help to ensu...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ionally, leading to less harmful to the general public’s health. For example, the cost of orga...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05415162455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70111381618 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9542284225 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303915704535 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992621927905 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611596660838 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182406694515 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609499869382 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to pay' or 'pay'.
Suggestion: to pay; pay
...ce to low-income families who need help paying for healthcare. This would help to ensu...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ionally, leading to less harmful to the general public’s health. For example, the cost of orga...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05415162455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70111381618 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9542284225 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303915704535 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992621927905 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611596660838 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182406694515 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609499869382 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.