In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, many mature citizens prefer living with their parents to having their own life even graduating and finding well-paid occupations. From my perspective, I think that the negativities may contain, however, the benefits accompanying overperformed with those.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that adults can reap enormous benefits from living under the same roof with their parents. In detail, they can have a great financial budget, which will be paid for many expenses like rent, personal activities, food if they have their own life. They in turn can utilize this money to enjoy life, or travel to tourism attractions. Furthermore, they may not bother to do the housework like cleaning, cooking, or taking care of other family members, they can spend all the time finding opportunities to enhance their careers. Consequently, those people’s living will be more convenient than remaining people.
On the other hand, continuing to living with parents even when having jobs also exist some drawbacks. First and foremost, because they get used to over-relying on their parents a long term, they may be lack financial management skills which will be extremely detrimental to themselves when they moved out and have their own life. Besides that, if the living with parents descends into private life, those people will get stuck in any trouble about the expenses or the way to handle the lifestyle, especially, they no longer have their durable shield as before to encourage or give words of wisdom when they fell down. As a result, the matures will have a lot of embarrassment with their own life.
To conclude, although living with parents under the same roof still exist some drawbacks, those pale in comparison with the positivities. Personally, I completely endorse those mature people should continue to live with their parents because of the enormous benefits it brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, well, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16504854369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7008794384 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1993106773 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324389587821 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125373965493 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634134561404 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200218589648 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336549247724 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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