In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?
Introduction: With the development of society, in parts of the world, an increasing number of people are keen on learning more about the history of their places of residence. Some explanations can be cited to explain this trend and how people can look into it.
Body 1: In general, the two main causes of an increasing of people wanting to know the history of the places they reside in are beliefs of their religion and strong finances. The tendency rises from people who have strong beliefs of culture and religion especially in Asia where most people respect and protect their beliefs and culture. Because they believe that the house or building they live in has bad feng shui will affect their career, wealth and save their mental health. For example, when their work is promoted in a short time, they move into a new house if the house had had the dead before or bad feng shui, it would have unfavourably affected their wealth. In addition, if they have strong finances, they will have high life requirements so it is obvious that they will choose to live in a good environment where has a safety protection system to protect their safety. For instance, a good environment will have neighbours with high culture, knowledge and no thieves or criminals. Thus, the reasons why humans want to know about the history of their house.
Body 2: Some possible solutions to this problem are searching on the internet and asking a real estate broker. The information about the house or building may be easily found on the internet for buyers or renters to know information quickly and conveniently. Furthermore, they are likely to use the traditional way to know the show flat how was it before such as ask a real estate broker about this problem so they will have a piece of true information. Moreover, a buyer or renter would hear many rumours surrounding the building are rumoured by the neighbours and people who have ever been here, however, it is not really true. This way, people will be more careful of living in a new show flat and will find out or ask somebody who knows about this.
Conclusion: To conclude, people’s activities that believe strongly the culture and religion have an impact on their life especially when they are rich people. However, they would know how to find it out by searching on the internet and hearing something neighbour say so the affair is necessary so that they might feel peaceful and comfortable living in there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...they move into a new house if the house had had the dead before or bad feng shui, it wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77699530516 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54218415973 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483568075117 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9882306904 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.1875 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323593808286 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110861343587 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065537102503 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209699857104 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657913436542 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.