In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
n today’s world, although in some countries young adults live at home with their parents is something that doesn't happen often, in several other nations this issue appears usual. This problem also has distinct benefits and drawbacks. From my experience, the benefits outweigh its disadvantage.
Whether adults keep living with parents depends on their suggestions and also their parents’ permit. Some families go solid for young people to move out of home and try living by themselves. Besides, numerous families decide not to allow so that ensure the safety of their children. The uncomfortable will be led to in daily life by this matter. In other words, adults must have private space to realize their plans, parents will hamper those because of their outdated thinking. Moreover, young people living in the bosom of families will gradually lose independence. In other words, adults will be got less social contact rather than other youngsters moving out of the home to live alone.
On the other hand, when youngsters continue residing with their parents until graduated and work for a company, there are various benefits. First, the free accommodation and free facility because this is their parents home and they needn’t pay any fee such as parking fee, water fee or rent. Second, adults, whose parents look after there are likely to have a greater advantage than others. Not only well cared for heath but also parents support adults in mentally. Finally, in modern society, crime appears more and more dangerous. If adults live far from their parents, they would be cheated even robbed by wrongdoers, therefore, parents are the guardians of adults’ safe and their house is always the best secure place .
That is to say , instead of going out and dwelling alone adults should consider staying with families to reduce any fee and also prevent bad situations from happening when alone.
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- Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- In some countries more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, such as, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12580645161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44641580264 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603225806452 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.563500166 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4705882353 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326547510842 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948162062325 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685744128855 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176131656583 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825467798652 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.