In some countries the number of people using bicycle main transport mode is decreasing even though his so beneficial why is this so how can people be encouraged to use more bicycles

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In some countries the number of people using bicycle main transport mode is decreasing even though his so beneficial why is this so how can people be encouraged to use more bicycles

In few nations majority of masses use bicycles and major transport mode reducing even though. It is worthwhile for human. However, some people donot like to use this because it consume a lot of time while traveling. individuals give more preference other mode of transportation. People should be awared by government and impose tax on other transportation.

To embark with, bicycle is reducing day by day because of other transportation system. Advancement of technology many gadgets launch every day people are more attractive toward them because other transport mean consume less time. They can reach on their destination in less time as compare to bicycle. Secondly, other means of transportation provide comfort and luxury lifestyle because that vehicle made by professionals and engineers it is their own responsibility to provide luxurious things to their customers. Owing to comfort people use other mean and they avoid the use of bicycle in their daily routine.

On the other hand, authority should take concrete steps towards this attitude of people to ignorance bicycle. Government should impose high tax on private vehicles when it happen then individual avoid the rampant use of these type vehicles. Such as, car, buses and so on. That is not only help to fit and fine and also stay away from diseases. Furthermore, administration should organise camps in schools or colleges to aware new generation towards bicycle and tell them the advantages of bicycle how it is helpful for us also campare to past that time people use bicycles instead of other vehicles and stay away from health problems.

To sum up, in modern era, people want to use comfortable vehicle. Thus in my point of view, it is not a bad idea to use other transportation system but people should use in limit and when they any local place then they should use bicycle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
In few nations majority of masses use bicycles and maj...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consumes'?
Suggestion: consumes
...eople donot like to use this because it consume a lot of time while traveling. individu...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individuals
... consume a lot of time while traveling. individuals give more preference other mode of tran...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...se high tax on private vehicles when it happen then individual avoid the rampant use o...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...people want to use comfortable vehicle. Thus in my point of view, it is not a bad id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06209150327 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80105014695 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6520631794 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316550861821 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980852451598 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702459849476 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201622425818 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523737588193 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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I see two issues:

1. don't need to put reasons in the introduction, like:

...because it consume a lot of time while traveling. individuals give more preference other mode of transportation. People should be awared by government and impose tax on other transportation.

2. I think you need to use more adjective/adverb clauses. Sentences are too simple.