In some countries, only a few young people go to classical music concerts or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?
In the world of art, the contribution of the classics will always remain unparalleled and timeless. Be it the broken English that Shakespeare called literature, or the music composed by Beethoven despite being deaf, classical art managed to capture the true essence of the world that we live in. With this notion in mind, it is a shame to see its light diminishing in the present world. Only a handful of today’s youth is interested in classical music, while the rest struggle to find a place among the EDMs and pop music charts. In my opinion, it is essential for young music enthusiasts to be exposed to the tunes composed by the maestros.
Music in the 21st century is attuned to the loud and fast-paced nature of the youth; the higher the tempo, the better. Amongst the various genres, upbeat music draws maximum attention; it caters to a more fun aspect of the art. Music today is also a permanent companion of several forms of dance. The youth consequently enjoys a dance which is enlivening and exhilarating. Nightclubs and concerts are considered to be dull and lifeless if they do not play electric guitars and auto-tuned vocals; but the origin of music came from the keys of a piano or the strings of a violin.
The minimising popularity of classical music does not help the overgrowing need for louder, more thrilling music. Classical music has garnered a reputation as boring and slow; it does not incite the hunger for more. However, that is not entirely correct. Classical music was composed as an outlet for the varying degrees of emotions a person felt. It was built as a way to describe the society, gradually becoming the epitome of expertise; a form of art which gave birth to masterpieces. It is my inference that if novice music performers begin their journey with the classics, they will be able to exploit their complete potential as musicians. They should be frequently encouraged to turn to classical music as a guide by attending concerts or playing instruments like the flute and harp.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81268011527 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74112639025 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7739840564 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342311759446 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998588150721 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808976462397 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219217167005 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570437592686 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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