In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is much important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is a fact that in some provinces around the world people prefer to build their residence in comparison to having a home as a tenant. In my point of view, it is undoubtedly a positive side for the country and its individual's for a few reasons.
To begin with, the size of the population and every individual country’s land capacity are the main reasons which are responsible for these circumstances. As an example, we can focus on countries like Canada and Russia. Both the countries are gigantic in terms of their land area and also have a less population to live. In some research, it is observed that Russia has less than 200 people living per square meter kilometer. It means they have plenty of land for their people, which encourages them to build their own houses.
Now to discuss the positive factors of such a case, we can start with the economic condition of the people of those specific countries. To illustrate, people having their own house at their land is the meaning of an economically well off solvent nation. To cite an example, It has been found in an economic statistic report that people from Canada may build their own dwellings by doing the job of any level, and with an add-on, the government offers loans to complete their house with a low rate of interest.
To conclude, in light of the earlier discussion it is explained that owning a home represents the wealthy situation of a country and its nation.
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is much important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive and negative situation Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experi 56
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is much important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge an 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68503937008 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63323144972 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6885230203 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204250553563 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787651649133 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305975038206 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1275649271 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00983861415459 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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