In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, people often choose to own a home instead of renting it. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and although it is beneficial for the buyer, I generally think it is not economically beneficial to society.
Homeownership is preferred in some East Asian countries such as Vietnam because it is considered by many to be an asset that they have a responsibility to preserve for their children. They themselves may have also inherited these properties from the previous generation and are worshipping their ancestors there, which their children are expected to continue. Living in a rented house for a lifetime, many people will consider it a failure in their lives. Homeownership can also be driven by an unstable economy, causing a sense of insecurity for people about risks such as job loss or rising prices. Owning a shelter is definitely more secure than renting a home without knowing whether the owner is going to raise the rent.
Although the desire to own a home may make people feel more secure, it is generally not economically beneficial to society. The capital value of a habitation is often very large, so investing it in business will create jobs and greater total assets for society. One might argue that if people want to own a home, then the housing project owners will be able to sell it. This is true, but if more people do not, the rental market will be more developed, and the houses and apartments will still be in demand. The only difference is that housing services will grow, creating more jobs and a more dynamic society.
In short, in my opinion, although house ownership has some spiritual benefits for individual owners, economically it is not good for society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, in short, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8801369863 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75435094826 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7645593632 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266283843206 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096750847162 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570390836304 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157664780368 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562314200423 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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