In some countries, people are spending long hours at the workplace. Why does this happen? Is it a positive or negative development?
In some countries, especially developed countries, the image of offices in large corporations with lights on from the night before to the next morning is not too strange. overtime is becoming more and more common in many countries, and I strongly believe that this practice does more harm than good.
Nowadays, many people choose to work overtime because of pressure from work. Besides, the attractive bonus from this job can help them meet the essential needs of life. In other words, working overtime has now become an indispensable part or considered an obligation of many people. In an era when economic development is at the forefront in many countries, increasing working hours for many people becomes an incentive for them to work longer hours to complete their work, believing that taking on more accountability can help them and their organizations thrive.
However, I think that if this trend continues to develop, there will be more cons than pros. No one can deny that making a lot of money will help people solve many problems in life. However, working with a tight schedule for many months brings a lot of pressure from work, harms health, from physical to mental, and easily leads to depression. In other words, people overwork to earn more money means they lose their health. Moreover, a person who only works hard to earn money will not be able to stay with his family and lose many good relationships. they find it very difficult to balance work and life, which leads to loss of close relationships and their own happiness, and in the future, they are very susceptible to isolation and depression.
In conclusion, while it's understandable why people are spending more time at work, I still believe it does more harm than we think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overtime
...to the next morning is not too strange. overtime is becoming more and more common in man...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...amily and lose many good relationships. they find it very difficult to balance work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90572390572 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67022260616 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3956185651 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124714760793 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476478369411 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460545438998 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942261551534 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446752008518 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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