In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at the store. Discuss both the pros and cons of this trend.
In many countries, online shopping has gained in popularity and outweighed brick-and-mortar stores, and this trend has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this development is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
There is a number of drawbacks of online shopping. First, since online customers cannot touch and feel the product physically before making buying decisions, they are able to gain bad experiences of shopping. In fact, many online stores are likely to deliver fake or low-quality items for the purpose of increasing profits in a deceptive way, leading to customers’ frustration as a result. Second, by placing orders and completing online transactions, shoppers will be able to run the risk of being victimized by computer crimes, such as ID theft. This means that e-commerce has been a breeding ground for hi-tech crimes, like hackers, which makes their personal information invaded.
However, there is a host of reasons why e-shopping is advantageous. First, in order to buy things without spending time commuting to the supermarket, online shopping will be a great choice for purchasers. For example, being able to buy goods with a click of mouse could cut down the costs for travel issues, which also makes it less time-consuming. Second, by using specified apps for online shopping, customers would receive plenty of discounts compared with traditional shopping. In fact, online stores do not need to pay the costs of running a shop such as housing, electricity, and wages to salespeople, which always appears a good deal for the consumer who uses the e-shopping.
In conclusion, online shopping is more useful and convenient than using the traditional way of buying things. By using online shopping as a smart user, it could bring customers lots of beneficial purchasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a deceptive way" with adverb for "deceptive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s for the purpose of increasing profits in a deceptive way, leading to customers' frustration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32876712329 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02038486187 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0320577363 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202364103561 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781726853863 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569540356742 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139997982946 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045248576217 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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