In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both
the pros and cons of this trend.
Nowadays, in many countries, online shopping has gained in popularity and outweighed brick-and-mortar stores, and this trend has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this development is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
On the one hand, e-commerce has negative impacts on human life to some extent. First, since online shopping prevents customers from touching or feeling the product physically before making a purchase, sometimes they might gain unpleasant experiences of shopping. In fact, many online stores are likely to deliver inferior items for the purpose of increasing profits in a deceptive avenue, leading to customers’ frustration as a result. Second, by placing orders and completing online transactions, shoppers will be able to run the risk of being victimized by computer crimes, such as ID theft. This means that e-business has been a breeding ground for hi-tech crimes, like hackers, which makes their personal information invaded.
On the other hand, under no circumstances should the benefits of e-trading be marginalized. First, with a view to enhancing convenience for customers, online retailers offer door-to-door services. This means that every client even the busy ones can go shopping at ease with just a click of mouse, and the merchandise will be delivered to their house a few days later, which reduces plenty of time. Second, if people buy items via the Internet, they are more likely to get a bargain than the traditional way. In fact, there are a variety of online shopping platforms, such as Ebay, Amazon, Tiki, and they provide a diversity of price range, which is conducive to customers because they can compare the price before buying in order to have the best price.
In conclusion, although this trend has some disadvantages, the advantages can outweigh those. By making some improvements in cybersecurity, and return policy, e-commerce will gradually substitute the traditional retail models.
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- Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways It is a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects 89
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40967741935 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98778122166 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4732726692 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201798317952 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613917375002 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484120167426 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126018822034 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238038671209 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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