In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
Nowadays, working or traveling for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies tends to be more and more popular for young people in some countries. However, I strongly believe that this trend would bring both benefits and drawbacks.
On the hand one, young people can take huge advantages of working or traveling for a year. Firstly, young people can have more time to rested and release stress after a period of studying tired and stress. Especially, high school graduation exam time is a hard of the period for the students who have to spend all time studying. Secondly, taking such a break can help students have time to live near family and bonding family feelings. For example, they can travel to many places or work together during that period and young people can learn numerous things and get various good advice from family. One more important thing, Working or traveling for a period of time before starting university studies is a good conditional to prepare for a new study environment. In fact, the study environment in high school and the university is very different so need to prepare carefully before starting university studies to avoid shock as easily better adapt.
One the other hand, there are several disadvantages of deciding to do it. First of all, spending time to work or travel before starting university studies will make students enroll later than our friends, so that can lead to later graduating from university and looking for job opportunities later than our peers. Second, It will make the students lose motivation to study or just focus to make money and neglect our main goal. For instance, having a break time period long will lead create laziness for students, It is also about losing motivation to learn and making them just enjoy playing and lose interest in learning. Besides, spend time working can also make them like to study anymore but just like to make money.
To sum up, there are both benefits and drawbacks of or working or traveling for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. I hold a firm belief that young people beings had better learn how to maximize the advantages also minimize the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 653, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9436997319 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51896043726 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7513529823 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441162641395 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15611101563 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132615351007 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313247538468 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111254788494 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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