In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies
In some nations kids do not have free time nor they has a lot of stressing about studies. there are plenty resons behind this. I will discuss my upcoming pareapragh.
Gone on the days, today's children have pressure about their studies .who has less timing spend other activities neither pupils are extremely involving in own subjects that juvenile always series about studies and they might taking over stress for hard work. In fact, young students could not partipicate any skills like as dance, acting, drama class, sports, music and so many other things. Therefore, they has not enjoying any party and festivals or occasions .
there is no denying the fact that first and foremost, nowadays education plays a vital role in their life that s why students have over obessing for the study but even they always ready to participates to anyone and over confidence not God for health.Otherwise, they can not beat someone then they would face some illness. For example, anxiety, obesity. Overthinking, depression. Thus, it might bad effect on body and mental level.
All said and done, I reckon education is most essential part of life but students are be series for studies and taking under over stress of this. they never participate any other skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ons kids do not have free time nor they has a lot of stressing about studies. ther...
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Suggestion: There
... has a lot of stressing about studies. there are plenty resons behind this. I will ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of stressing about studies. there are plenty resons behind this. I will discus...
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Suggestion: .
...ildren have pressure about their studies .who has less timing spend other activiti...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...g spend other activities neither pupils are extremely involving in own subjects that juvenile always se...
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Suggestion:
...tudies and they might taking over stress for hard work. In fact, young students c...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...d so many other things. Therefore, they has not enjoying any party and festivals or...
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Suggestion: .
...ing any party and festivals or occasions . there is no denying the fact that f...
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Suggestion: There
... party and festivals or occasions . there is no denying the fact that first and f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e in their life that s why students have over obessing for the study but even the...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'participate'.
Suggestion: participate
...the study but even they always ready to participates to anyone and over confidence not God f...
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Suggestion: Otherwise
... and over confidence not God for health.Otherwise, they can not beat someone then they wo...
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Suggestion: They
...s and taking under over stress of this. they never participate any other skills. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i reckon, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50648139422 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688995215311 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.6086074113 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184264383626 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459934011827 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693049989703 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105385911802 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465415871624 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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