In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough
What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Different cultures employ various methods to raise children. In many countries, educational systems emphasize the importance of hard work as a means to achieve one's goals. While this mindset fosters a sense of competition among children, it can also lead to negative consequences such as jealousy, animosity, and even depression if they fail to attain their objectives.
On the positive side, encouraging children to strive and put in effort is beneficial. It instills in them the understanding that reaching their goals necessitates dedication and perseverance. They develop the belief that anything is attainable if they are willing to exert sufficient effort. Moreover, this mindset can play a pivotal role in shaping resilient individuals who possess the ability to solve problems independently and stand on their own feet.
However, it is essential for educational systems and parents to be mindful of the potential long-term negative effects. Jealousy, for instance, can be detrimental to a child's well-being during their formative years. It can engender a sense of animosity towards competitors. Furthermore, unsuccessful attempts at achieving goals can potentially lead to feelings of depression.
To mitigate these negative effects, it is crucial to establish a sound educational framework that is adhered to by parents and schools alike. By doing so, the detrimental consequences can be minimized. A noteworthy example of a culture that successfully balances this aspect is Japan, where individuals tend to be highly accomplished.
In conclusion, conveying the message of the importance of hard work to children yields numerous positive outcomes that manifest in their adult lives. However, it is vital to address and mitigate the potential negative effects through a well-structured educational approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69597069597 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24748361364 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5890609087 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214853997303 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063174095557 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544802288636 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112549119188 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608460150025 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.