Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
People divided in their opinion about teaching foreign language. some opine that student should learn foreign language in very beginning of their life at primary level while other believe secondary level is better.Here, pros outstrip cons
First and foremost in childhood learning is comparatively easy.as they do not have any tension,no hesitation.furthermore their memory remain active all time so external matter can catch quickly . in this period those they memorize remain stable for life time.Resarch shows that infant can store their knowledge 10 times higher than adult.Consequently it will make their life smooth.
In addition we live in a competitive era that's why multitasking in highly recommended.For cope up with this time only mother tongue can not make us successful .Due to this reason we should strong their basic at fundamental level
however those advocate foreign language should taught after finishing primary standard because of small children face more difficulties new language. Huge pressure will arise from first stage also extra stress will lose their interested towards study.For example because of bareness many children stopped going to school that is bad for family as well as nations.
To my way learing from childhood makes them perfect for future . they will remain one step forward from other those are not conscious about learning unusal.job recruiter will preferred multi language holder
To sum up considering all the issues it can say that learning foreign language is a controversial issue .But i think the advantage of former view has strongest point of view with some exceptional which is negligible .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43359375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92469449643 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68359375 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.903855961 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.714285714 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.8571428571 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249300333846 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940532797089 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543302481726 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11162356154 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595230390166 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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