you have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new place
invite your friend to come and visit you.
Dear James,
I am writing you this letter to inform you that i have moved from my former house which was at golden valley due to security problems.
Let me explain my situation in details. There have been numerous attacks and robbery at golden valley in last couple of months and this trend continue to increase rapidly over the period. People are getting killed like flies and the robbery has become a daily routine, currently it is like a dessert here as almost everybody living in the neighborhood has flee for safety reasons. So i decided to move as well to avoid been victimized and to protect my family from these jailer of virtue.
I have moved to creek view estate which is located at Rob Stark road. Well i must confess me and my family are loving it, it is a three bedroom apartment with four toilets and the compound is located in a serine environment, with heavily armed police force securing the entrance of the gate. The road linking all streets are tilled properly, my house number, is number 12B and it is painted with pink and yellow. It is better than where i use to live in every single aspect.
Could you come and visit me and the kids someday. As we have truly miss your company and sense of humor and you can use this opportunity to finally meet my mom.
Please let me know if you will be able to make the trip down here and when will you likely be able to as well.
Your Friend
Jay Neymar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'fled'.
Suggestion: fled
...verybody living in the neighborhood has flee for safety reasons. So i decided to mov...
^^^^
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...borhood has flee for safety reasons. So i decided to move as well to avoid been v...
^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this jailer' or 'these jailers'?
Suggestion: this jailer; these jailers
...ictimized and to protect my family from these jailer of virtue. I have moved to creek vie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hich is located at Rob Stark road. Well i must confess me and my family are lovin...
^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...d. Well i must confess me and my family are loving it, it is a three bedroom apartment wit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 438, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ink and yellow. It is better than where i use to live in every single aspect. ...
^
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...k and yellow. It is better than where i use to live in every single aspect. Coul...
^^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'missed'.
Suggestion: missed
... and the kids someday. As we have truly miss your company and sense of humor and you...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43939393939 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17421602771 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8662918426 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232940901426 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082108396075 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862914035881 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131884988025 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947736214134 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.