Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humans are now living in the age of advertisement. People can experience an advert wherever they travel to. However, I believe there are some advertising methods that are unethical and inappropriate due to their exaggeration and large spread in society.
To begin with, there are some immoral advertising methods. Some companies aim to gain large profits regardless of negative effects buyers might suffer. As a result, they exaggerate the quality and the importance of their sale products. This phenomenon is able to be witnessed in some online shopping apps. Although the pictures and the descriptions of some online things are attractive, the users cannot take advantage of the products when they buy them. Those exaggerated adverts are unethical because they are inaccurate and do harm to the buyers. The buyers can lose their money when purchasing these useless things.
Moreover, advertisements can be seen ubiquitously to be unacceptable. Adverts on the walls of some houses, on the trees, leaflets on the roads' surface may contribute to visual pollution. They can make a beautiful city become unattractive; consequently, fewer visitors choose that city to go on holidays. Furthermore its economy develops slowly, the unemployment can increase.
In conclusion, people may suffer from visual pollution and numerous unreliable advertisements and some may be aggressive when witnessing too many adverts. However, it is undeniable that advertising contributes to the economic development of all areas around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52564102564 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12043369355 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2142077092 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138292646215 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443911473098 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490791478219 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085043570115 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304127778184 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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